JAMES R. BENN: The Zelig Problem
Zelig was a film built around a protagonist who crept into the lives of famous people. That was his superpower. But it’s trickier in a historical mystery series in which the whole idea is to place the protagonist amid vital events and important people. Why?
That’s my challenge – to have the reader not think about it. Each plot point, whether it’s the IRA stealing weapons or a double murder at a Soviet airbase, must provide access, via a conceptual side door, to the events and people I want to explore and illuminate. When Billy Boyle journeyed to the South Pacific in The White Ghost, it was because I wanted to delve into the personality of Jack Kennedy at the time of his PT 109 experience. But I had to avoid the trap of coming across like some of my favorite books as a child.
Anyone remember the We Were There series, published during the 1950s? Over thirty titles featured the retelling of historical events through the eyes of children as primary characters. We Were There On The Oregon Trail, We Were There at the Battle of the Bulge, and so on. I loved those books, and perhaps the seed of the Billy Boyle series was planted there, but I can’t put him center stage the way those kids were.
It's important for Billy to act as the observer when it comes to historical characters. Even as he works his Zelig magic, he can’t be the primary mover of actual events. When he visits Jack Kennedy on Tulagi during a murder investigation, the future president is recovering from his shipwreck ordeal. During Billy’s search for a killer, the story of Kennedy, his crew, and the sinking of PT 109 is revealed. I could have had the murder take place before the PT boat disaster, and perhaps have ginned up some reason for Billy to be on board. But that’s too much Zelig. And it’s stealing the story from the characters who are all real people.
Some events are simply too huge to wrap a story around. The Normandy invasion was one. I’d tried to work out how D-Day could form the basis of a plot, but I gave up and had Billy literally fly over the invasion fleet on his way to a clandestine rendezvous behind the lines in Blue Madonna:
Below us, ships filled the Channel. To the far horizon, wakes churned the inky water as vessels of every size departed English ports and made for the French coastline. Moonlight rippled across the waves, shimmering slivers of silver in the night. I glanced at the luminous dial on my watch. Forty minutes past midnight. It was the sixth of June.
The biggest challenge, in terms of keeping Billy from hogging center stage, came with the latest novel, From The Shadows. I’d long wanted to write about the 442nd Regimental Combat Team, a unit made of Nisei (Japanese American citizens) whose families were incarcerated in relocation camps due to racial hatred.
I found my hook for the plot when I discovered how they were treated by a general in southern France. The Nisei were attached to a division whose commanding officer had gotten a battalion surrounded through his own ineptitude. He sent in the 442nd to rescue them, with little regard for their lives. They prevailed, but at a terrible cost.
Billy is in the area on a case. Two members of the French Resistance are serving as scouts with the trapped battalion. These two men are witnesses to the murder he’s investigating, and he’s there to bring them out safely. But he can only go so far:
There was no bayonet charge, no shouting, no grand gestures, just a wave of men swallowed by the forest, firing from the hip, killing Germans and being killed. I gripped my Thompson and took a step toward the struggle.
“No, Billy,” Kaz said, his hand on my shoulder. “This is not our fight. If we were to be killed, even if the scouts survive, we would have failed everyone.”
“You don’t have to go with me,” I said, my eyes on the Nisei disappearing into the smoke and dense woods.
“You know I would not let you go into that alone,” Kaz said.
I dropped back a foot. He was right. About it all. If I went, Kaz would be at my side. In my heart, I knew we weren’t here for a valiant last charge. Our job was to wait and salvage what we
could of our mission if the scouts were left alive.
And my heart also knew I’d never forget the moment I watched those men advance into hell’s open, gaping jaws.
Exactly the right amount of Zelig.
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James R. Benn is the Dilys, Barry, and Sue Feder Historical Mystery award nominated author of the Billy Boyle WWII mysteries and other novels. He lives on the Gulf Coast of Florida with his wife and muse, Deborah Mandel.
You are not alone in trying to recall what other roles the actors have played every time you watch a new production. Often the actors or the audience can't quite jettison their previous personas and that can wreck the new production too. Sadly though, in all likelihood it won't be a new production but a remake.
ReplyDeleteIf success is to breed success the film industry must not lazily polish old gems but mine for new ones. The espionage genre suffers much from the lazy risk averse philosophy of polishing old gems. Bond, Palmer, Smiley, Bond, Palmer, Smiley, Bond and Bond again!
A good example of such a new gem in the espionage genre is Beyond Enkription, the first spy thriller in The Burlington Files series. It would make for a stunning TV series or films and, being based on fact, it would be more difficult for actors and TV producers to deliver a lazy production.
Why choose The Burlington Files when some critics have likened its protagonist to a "posh and sophisticated Harry Palmer"? Maybe it has a touch of Michael Caine magic but on another positive note it is indisputably anti-Bond rather than merely Deightonesque. Film producers should check out this enigmatic and elusive thriller. As it's not yet a remake it may have eluded them to date.