Hilary Price from Rhymes with Orange
Thursday, February 24, 2022
Wednesday, February 23, 2022
Los Angeles Times Book Prizes: Finalists in Mystery/Thriller
Mystery/thriller
Alison Gaylin, The Collective
Megan Abbott, The Turnout
Michael Connelly, The Dark Hours
S.A. Cosby, Razorblade Tears
Silvia Moreno-Garcia, Velvet Was the Night
Tuesday, February 22, 2022
A STEP-BY-STEP GUIDE FOR WRITING TIME TRAVEL: Guest Post by Rob Hart
ROB HART: A Step-by-Step Guide for Writing Time Travel
Develop a healthy fascination with the genre, laying the groundwork with stuff like Lightning by Dean Koontz, Slaughterhouse Five by Kurt Vonnegut, Kindred by Octavia Butler, Timecop, Primer, and the fourth season of Lost.
Get an actual idea for a premise. Like, you could visit an interactive theater experience (Sleep No More), and as you’re wandering the cavernous, circuitous space, think to yourself, “What if there was a hotel where you could enter a room and be five minutes in the future, or ten minutes in the past?”
Open a Google doc, write “time travel hotel,” close it, do not open again for several months.
Decide: Now is the time to write a time travel story! This cannot possibly be a difficult task. Come up with a premise: a locked-room mystery, a hotel house detective on the brink of madness, financial shenanigans perpetuated by billionaires.
Do a lot of reading in time travel and quantum physics, until you brain is bent into a literal pretzel and you realize we are but a speck of dust in a vast and uncaring universe
After the existential crisis passes, come up with your “rules” for time travel. How do you make it different than what came before? Can’t be hard, right?
It is in fact very hard.
After tons of notes and charts and ideas hastily scribbled on napkins, take your time travel rules and start outlining your story. Start with a linear narrative, then throw it into a box and shake it really hard and look at where everything ended up and try to figure out why you did this to yourself. It’s not a good way to write.
Start again. Figure out how to lay breadcrumbs in a story where time is fluid. Decide what information you can tease the reader with, before revealing more later on, shifting their understanding and perspective.
Keep exhaustive notes. Draw maps—it’s good to have a sense of space.
Finish the book. Edit it over and over, and then send it to trusted friends, who will gently explain to you how much of it doesn’t make sense. Because all that time travel stuff you thought you figured out? Yeah, it worked great in your head, not so much on the page.
Edit. Rewrite. Get your agent involved. He will also shrug his shoulders at you. Pull back and look at the big picture. Be ready to pivot and change how things work. -Find that if you did your research, and you’re passionate about your story, it’ll all be there. It’s an editing job just like any other novel: taking all the ideas on the page, smoothing them out, making them work in sequence (or, in this case, slightly out of sequence), and have faith that in the end, the story will shine.
Give the book to your editor, who will deconstruct the entire thing and make you realize how much still doesn’t make sense.
Sob softly into a beverage—alcoholic or non, the choice is yours.
Take your editor’s notes, dig deep, and do the work. Eventually you will find that you managed to write what you meant to do from the outset: a story about grief, pain, and the impossibility of facing yourself, but also, there are robots and dinosaurs, because if you’re going to write time travel, you’re damn sure going to have a good time doing it.
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Rob Hart is the author of The Paradox Hotel. His last novel, The Warehouse, sold in more than 20 countries and was optioned for film by Ron Howard. He also wrote the Ash McKenna crime series, the short story collection Take-Out, and Scott Free with James Patterson.
BARBARA NEELY GRANT RECIPIENTS: Mystery Writers of America
Barbara Neely was the author of the “Blanche” series, one of the first crime fiction series to feature a Black woman as the protagonist. While there were only four books in the series, Ms. Neely was not only a role model, but a major influence for an entire new generation of Black women writers. Mystery Writers of America named her a Grand Master in November of 2019 to recognize her enormous contributions to the genre as well as her impact on the crime fiction community. Unfortunately, Ms. Neely passed away before she could accept the honor in person in April 2020 at the Edgars presentation and in 2021, MWA created a scholarship program for Black crime fiction writers in her name; one for an already published author, and another for one just getting started in publishing.
“We received some absolutely stunning applications,” said MWA’s Executive Vice President Greg Herren. “I was glad I wasn’t asked to be one of the judges because it would have been incredibly difficult to choose just two.”
Austin Camacho, Christopher Chambers, and Faye Snowden served as judges for the first annual Barbara Neely Grants.
The grant comes with a $2000 award to assist each recipient with any aspect of their career as they see fit. “There are a lot of financial challenges for writers at every stage of their career,” Herren went on to say. “Whether you need some software, a new computer, maybe a weekend away from the kids. We hope this cash award will help give the recipients’ career a needed boost, however they see fit.”
Jonathan Brown writes the Lou Crasher mysteries. Lou Crasher is a rock drummer turned amateur P.I. The Big Crescendo was released November 2019, followed by Don’t Shoot the Drummer in November 2020. Both novels were published by Down and Out Books. The third book, Drums Guns ‘n’ Money, is expected to be released mid-2022. Brown has also written a stand-alone with a female protagonist. Chloe is slated for release late 2022 on Level Best Books. Chloe is the first of three standalones featuring (bad ass) female protagonists. In addition to writing, Brown teaches private drum lessons, is a fitness trainer and is branching out into audiobook narration. He draws from his experience as a drummer to capture L.A.’s music scene for his Crasher novels. As a black belt in Hapkido karate he writes action and fight scenes with zeal.
Necole Ryse has been writing since she was four years old when she triumphantly carved the alphabet on the hood of her grandmother’s brand new Volvo. Alive and well, Necole has since authored several books that are light on love and heavy on murder, available wherever books are sold online. When she’s not writing, she’s weeping into a stack of unfinished manuscripts, abandoning exercise regimens, scolding innocent children in libraries, or listening to other people’s conversations.
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